13 April 2008 @ 03:51 pm
 
Title: You Want To Get Inside (Well Get In Line)
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Sawyer/Claire.
Word Count: 815
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: For [info]super_kc 
Author's Note: Can be considered a follow up to In The Winding Down Hours.
Summary: AU. This looks like something out of one of those horribly corny western movies.

They’re staring at each other.

 

Staring, and not in the way where people are staring off into space and just happen to be looking at a face. Not in the way where they’re studying each other. It’s more like glaring. A face-off.

 

Yeah, that’s it.

 

A face-off, like in those horribly corny western movies where they stand across from each other right in front of the saloon and glare and glare until one of them whips out a pistol and shoots.

 

She’s just realized that they are in fact armed. That analogy just became a whole lot less funny.

 

That’s not really the point. The point is they’re doing this, in the middle of everything and everyone, over pretty much nothing other than frayed nerves and too much stress and pressure.

 

Kate probably thinks this is about her. After all, isn’t everything? She’s watching them like she’s five seconds from stalking over there and getting in between them, like that will actually even help. It’ll probably just make them more irritated with each other and really, standing here instead of, you know, going where they’re supposed to be is a time waster and they are sort of on a schedule. It’ll be dark in an hour and they’re in a clearing. Not where they want to be unless being sitting ducks is appealing.

 

She hands Aaron off to Sun, and, deciding to save them all the trouble, marches herself over to them, so she can keep her voice down low and no one else can hear here.

 

“Can’t this wait until later?” She asks, softly, voice betraying her words, and they both seem surprised that this is coming from her. She’s getting a little tired of being the nice one these days; stress has taken its own toll on her.

 

They break apart, break gazes, break stances, break tension, and, for now at least, disaster is averted.

 

---

 

Five hours later, now under the cover darkness, they are back at it again.

 

“You know people are going to start to wonder if something’s going on between you two.” Everyone else is asleep, and they’re far enough away from the others that no amount of talking is going to wake them up.

 

She lays down on a sleeping bag that she knows for a fact is not hers -- Aaron’s asleep next to hers – and Sawyer shots a look at her. “Why would they? They haven’t figured it out yet.”

 

“It takes awhile.” Claire tells him, with a shrug. “It took me awhile.”

 

“Can we not think about that right now?” This from Jack. No surprise here, he’s worried about how people will view him if they find out that it’s not Kate he’s fucking at night. Sawyer just doesn’t care.

 

That worry, and Sawyer’s just complete lack of showing proper emotion to, well, anything, is what gets them in these arguments. That and all the stress. “You two just need to relax.”

 

She gets back up, gets on tip-toe to reach up and kiss Sawyer, her hand on his stubble-covered cheek, tongue lazily finding its way inside his mouth. She picks him over Jack because Jack is full of too much nervous energy at the moment, and he would only push her away. A little show might fix that problem.

 

Her other arm loops around his neck, holding herself up and closer, as she feels his hard-on press into her stomach while his hand comes up, fingers spreading over her breast. If they keep this up they’ll be on the ground, out of their clothes, in no time.

 

Which is why she stops, pulls away, and flings herself back to her previous position on the ground, legs spread just enough for them to notice. She may be wet but they don’t have to know. All they know right now is that she’s an enormous tease. Voice laced with sugar and amusement, she tells them, “Now kiss and make up.”

 

They both give her a look at the order and make absolutely no move to follow through.

 

“Well it’s not like you aren’t going to at some point.” She defends, with a smile that befit a giggly schoolgirl.

 

It’s easier when this is a big joke. It takes some of the tension out of the air.

 

She closes her eyes in the comfortable silence, and when she opens them again, they’ve found each other. Claire watches them kiss for a moment, watches the way they kiss. It brings back memories from before she was a part of this, when all she did was watch. Then she gets up, grabs Jack’s hand, and pulls him toward her, catching his lips, this time slow and sensual. She manages to get Jack’s shirt off, and breaks the kiss, looks back at Sawyer with a mischievous grin, and lets him take over.

 

Like usual. Like always.

 

They’ll be just fine. 

 
 
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Ambassador Dummy Dummy Dumb Dums: lost: jawyercita - separated[info]crickets on April 13th, 2008 08:16 pm (UTC)
I love it! LOVE! You just made my crappy day so much better! I like the little bit about Kate thinking it's about her. Hehehe. You should totally write more of this series sometime in the future!

I like the bit at the end about Sawyer taking over. Claire seems so... bold in this. Like she's instigating the whole thing. I really like the way you've written her.

Excellent.

Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 13th, 2008 08:21 pm (UTC)
I read your post and you seemed down so I put the finishing touches on this and posted. And you know this I may continue with, who knows.

I kind of...I don't know, felt like Claire was too bold. Maybe out of character. But this ship is hard you know because it has to be somewhat out of character to get it to work right.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for the prompt and for reviewing!

(And we are icon twins, lol)
Ambassador Dummy Dummy Dumb Dums: lost: jawyercita - disgrace bw[info]crickets on April 13th, 2008 08:23 pm (UTC)
This is true but I thought it worked well I mean half of what we write hinges on the characters we see regularly behaving unpredictably. I thought you did it quite well if it's any consolation!
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 13th, 2008 08:24 pm (UTC)
That's all the consolation I need. It was written for you and as long as you liked it, screw everyone else ;)
Cleo: get it back[info]cleuchi on April 13th, 2008 09:06 pm (UTC)
HEE, amazing! I really liked Claire in here, and the comparation you make between her and a schoolgirl. Oh, if this was canon I'd come everytime I saw it x3
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 13th, 2008 09:18 pm (UTC)
Well schoolgirl's are supposed to be the dirty ones ;) Shame this isn't canon.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
Where Is My Mind?: {BSG - Starbuck} Winner Takes All.[info]space_dementia6 on April 13th, 2008 09:12 pm (UTC)
I really do love how you write this pairing, it really attracts me to the pairing and that is surely the sign of a skilful writer. Your plots are always so perfect and it is a real treat just to be able to read it.

Well Done Amber.!:D
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 13th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
The pairing is fun. It's a stretch but it's worth it because it's actually interesting to write.

I'm glad you liked it sweetie! Thanks for reading!
lenina20: sawyer claire[info]lenina20 on April 13th, 2008 10:31 pm (UTC)
:D:D:D You did this, too! I totally love. I know I say it every time but I absolutely love your Claire. She is so much more than the face that it's usually shown of her (me says, the queen of MS Claire!) I think this is perfect, and deep, and sexy and fun and sexy again. It makes perfect sense and I have to say that I really like this OT3 for whatever reason (the way you write it is a very powerful reason) Lovely fic!
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 14th, 2008 02:10 am (UTC)
My Claire is tragically out of character, but I like her that way. Especially with this OT3. But hey, if it makes people happy then I'm not complaining.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
Mary: Claire - Sugar & Spice[info]bebitched on April 14th, 2008 01:11 am (UTC)
Ha! I love the tense but playful tone to this, how Claire acts the giddy schoolgirl to ease the tension between her two boys. Great job!
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 14th, 2008 02:11 am (UTC)
Acts. Good word. That's precisely what she's doing.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
aboutbunnies: claire[info]aboutbunnies on April 14th, 2008 04:29 am (UTC)
Hee. Fun! I usually avoid Jack/Sawyer fics like the plague, but I was intrigued. Claire is so bold in this but I like it; it's about time she gets emotional/aggravated about something (oops, did I say that?).

It’s easier when this is a big joke. It takes some of the tension out of the air.
Absolutely. And kudos to Claire for figuring that out about these two and then acting on it.
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 14th, 2008 03:52 pm (UTC)
Let me guess, not a Jawyer fan? I'd figured. I've been into them awhile, and since the Canon OT3 bores the shit out of me these days, I'm much more open to writing these three together.

Claire is different in this, very much so, but having some time to think on it I'm glad I wrote her that way. She could be, we just haven't seen her act that way yet.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
aboutbunnies[info]aboutbunnies on April 15th, 2008 04:02 am (UTC)
No, not a Jawyer fan. It has to do with not liking Jack a whole lot, but moreso because Sawyer is pretty much the most hetero character ever. I just can't slash him. Don't see it working. So kudos to you for getting me to read and enjoy this - you know you're good :)
Ranger[info]siluria on April 14th, 2008 05:06 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmmmmm, yummy - I do like me a bit of angsty J/S ;)
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 14th, 2008 06:35 pm (UTC)
Ah yes, the sort of backdoor way to writing J/S. But I love them angsty too :)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
Lou: Lost - jack and sawyer- got this honey[info]gottalovev on April 15th, 2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
heee, they so would have a standoff in the middle of everyone for whatever reason. good they have Claire to make the tension go down. and well turning it into something else. (lucky her) =D
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 17th, 2008 01:54 am (UTC)
They so would, and it's kind of amusing :)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
a geek in such the wrong way: josh-wet love[info]haldoor on April 19th, 2008 08:00 am (UTC)
Lovely! I don't normally look for the het, but I do like how you portray Claire, and the fact that it's more about Jack/Sawyer has it's appeal, of course! Yes, your Claire is very strong and assured, and I like that! (and the boys are, of course, HOT!) ;-)
Stephanie (Amber): Jawyercita[info]slybrunette on April 20th, 2008 05:14 pm (UTC)
The het writer in me has a hard time just doing slash these days, and these three are my OT3, so it just kind of...wrote itself.

Anyways, I'm glad you liked this, despite it not being full-out slash, and I appreciate you reading and reviewing!
elliotsmelliot: Claire[info]elliotsmelliot on September 23rd, 2008 12:59 am (UTC)
Hi! I'm here as part of the Feedback Challenge. I read this before but I'm sorry not to have left any feedback. It really plays to Claire's underused strengths as a peacemaker. She is able to diffuse the situation with words, charm, and distraction. I find this pairing so intriguing and yet uncomfortable, but like Claire you are able to diffuse my discomfort!
Stephanie (Amber): LOST. Jawyercita; we come alive again[info]slybrunette on October 2nd, 2008 08:13 pm (UTC)
Unfortunately I have a tendency to forget to comment a lot. Or be too pressed for time. So I totally understand.

Claire would be a good peacemaker. I believe she has a fairly good handle on people, plus she has people skills (a rarity on this show, I swear).

I'm glad you liked this (and that I was able to make it a little less uncomfortable for you -- I totally understand your reservations)! Thanks for reading and reviewing!